Thursday 2 July 2020
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Nice work!
ReplyDeleteHi its Harry from paroa
I like how you have write about a new zealand culture holiday. Matariki is also called the pleaides cluster.Our class has looked into the origins of other places around the world maybe you could look nto that too?
Hi Ilaisaane this is me Gunveen. I like the way how you have given the information about Matariki. its good.
ReplyDeleteHi Its Harry from Paroa
ReplyDeleteThis is great work but an explanation text needs 3 paragraphs an introduction and a conclusion.You just need another paragraph and a introduction.Our class have been doing explanation texts as well