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Tuesday 17 December 2019

How I would feel if I was Neil Armstrong - Summer learning Journey

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  1. Hey Ilaisaane,

    I like your thoughts on how it must have felt like to be the first person on the moon. It would have definitely been scary and he would have been brave and proud. The two posters you've included are really nice additions too. This activity was actually asking you to write a poem based on how it would have felt, this is still a good post but make sure to read the whole activity aye.

    See you in the comments.

    Daniel :)

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